feedback of rough cut s1- 23

There was a lack of non diegetic sound, and that may improve the tension that we saw in the clip, though the diegetic sound was used very effectively for creating a feel of what is going to happen next. The attempts at having the credits being in blood on areas that appeared when the girl moved out of the way, reavealing it, was a good idea, but it could be done so that it is easier to read, as we were unable to read some of them.

The fake blood was very good, it seemed believable and was used very well.

The camera angles were limited due to the small space that the filming was done in, however, high angle shots while the girl is in the shower were good because it showed her in a position of weakness, especially when she started bleeding. the plug hole shot was also good showing the blood dripping down and washing away. Still, there could have been a few more shots or another character so that dialogue could have been used.

Feedback from S1- 23

There are a few spelling errors towards the end of the blog, also it would be helpful to include the timings for each shot so we can get a better feel for how the film will flow.
Good detail throughout the blog and description of props and characters, costumes.
Useful list of locations, where it is being filmed, who's house it is.