feedback from s1- 21

We found the introduction was good but need to add more tension by including a soundtrack. The credits were creative and fitted the thriller genre well. Although they could have stayed on the screen for longer as you didn't get a chance to read it. Also at the beggining when jazz walks past the camera should be turned into slow motion so you read what is writen. Once more editing has been done your intentions clearer. Overall you need to add more exitment and possibley more footage to your opening sequence. We the blooooood dribbiling from the shower, this was very inventive.