S1-24 Feedback

Very good mise en scene with the fake blood being used to great effect.

There was no music but the group probably had no time to put it in so with music in the tension would me much greater making the film opening much better. There is also no dialogue and putting just one or two lines in could get this group a few more marks.

The camera angles were appropriate with a number of establishing and close up shots being used however a couple of them weren't kept still making the shots shaky.

The titles were very appropriate with the use of fake blood on the shower door, it me the narrative well and met the criteria of a thriller.

There was a very obvious protagonist in the film opening and this group also managed to put her in peril. The location was well chosen and suspense was very well created to make an ordinary situation thrilling and exciting. There was however no clear Antagonist and maybe he/she could be introduced in the last 40 seconds which haven't been put in the film.