Friday 12 March 2010

feedback from S1-20 !

this opening is good as at the beginning the establishing shot sets the location well. Furthermore, the mise-en-scene is very good as the blood being used looks realistic when she is showering. However, the credits are hard to read as they go to quickly and are generally hard to read.
However, there is good use of diegetic sound however the non-diegetic sound is lacking.
There are no clear protagonist and antagonist however there is a clear victim in this and is made to look vulnerable by the camera shots which is good.
There is a bit with photos show which does not make sense and we are not clear on what it is meant to mean.
overall the editing and camera shot are good and create a well made opening.

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