Feedback of rough cut from S1-22

The credits were really good as they fitted well with narrative of the thriller. You needed to have credits and a title for it to look more like an opening. The mise-en-scene was conventional as the props of the blood were effective. The close-ups used of the feet were conventional as they add mystery to the opening.

There needs to be sound for the opening to be more successful to a thriller. The fast jumpcut between shots were good but we think there should be more throughout the opening, as this would add unease and not relaxed.