Feedback from s1-21;
This ten second breakdown ideas are explored well, however time scale on this opening sequence need to be more clear, and how they are going to go about filming this clip. Although quite orginal, the storyline is good and i belive once to footage has been captured it will be exciting to watch. The atmosphere of the thriller flows well. In order not to loose time, creating the indent to almost fill the first ten seconds will need to be an essential.

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